Last Thursday 17th of November me and my classmate Mar Oliva did an oral presentation about dreams. So, now, I'm going to comment it a little bit to see our mistakes and in what we can improve.
PRESENTATION:
I think our recourses were good. We didn't put almost any text in the presentation, just images to make it more visual and entertaining. We also used a video at the end of the presentation and, from my point of view, it was very interesting and helped the audience to know a little more about dreams. Focusing on the timing, it lasted 8:44 minutes, so it was all right.
BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT:
During the presentation, I tried by best to look as less as possible my paper, but in a few times I had to just check on it. Even though I kind of like doing oral presentations, I always get a bit nervous, so it’s normal that I looked on my paper. But, of course, I didn’t read, so I think it was OK. I also tried to make eye contact with everybody in the class, and I think I did it all right.
STRUCTURE:
About the structure, we tried to organize all the information as good as we could, and I think we made it. We did an introduction, then we presented the ideas and finally we did a conclusion.
CONTENT:
While we were doing the presentation, we tried our best not to put boring information in it, we chose the most interesting things we found (according to the topic) and we tried to make it funny and pleasant. About that part, I can’t judge it properly, I think the audience has to do it. But, well, if I have to say something, I would say we did it very good.
LANGUAGE:
Now that I listen to the presentation, I see that I’ve made a few errors because of my nerves, but not so much. A good think that I see in myself is that most of the times when I did a mistake, I corrected it.
PRONUNCIATION AND INTONATION:
I think I have quite a good pronunciation but, of course, I can improve a lot! About the intonation, I tried to make questions, change my tone of voice… to keep the audience’s attention.
So, in conclusion, I think we made a good oral presentation, but we can always improve!
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